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Laying in bed staring up at the ceiling,
Staring at the dots above like drifting clouds,
Cool air circulating around me:
Calm, cool darkness permeates the air.
Birds drifting across the sky,
an endless wave of wings a-flutter,
streaking across a mass of clouds,
suspended like marshmallows
floating in a sea of hot chocolate.
Blue stolid planes of shifting silence
moving across the celestial sphere.
Closing in around my head,
forms of suffocating fear.
Crushing... heavy... cold.
Head resting on a pillow of stone.
Arms folded across my chest.
All is still -
lost within the dark night.
Staring at the dots above like drifting clouds,
Cool air circulating around me:
Calm, cool darkness permeates the air.
Birds drifting across the sky,
an endless wave of wings a-flutter,
streaking across a mass of clouds,
suspended like marshmallows
floating in a sea of hot chocolate.
Blue stolid planes of shifting silence
moving across the celestial sphere.
Closing in around my head,
forms of suffocating fear.
Crushing... heavy... cold.
Head resting on a pillow of stone.
Arms folded across my chest.
All is still -
lost within the dark night.
Literature
{An Education}
It's like death
Precious notions
You gasp-
Collapse into the vertigo
The world where things take shape
Destroy and Recreate
So much so that your mind is a stranger
You might as well
Be dead
Real death
By yourself and left to fend
Ideas and opinions broken and then
Changed into a likeness of Truth, you mend
Pieces joined, and while there's freedom again
Sleepless nights-
Your pulled
Left and right
Thoughts hidden in plain sight
Tangled sheets you try to fight
And toss and turn in the night
Because
It most times gray
And (never) black and white
Pulls the wool form over your eyes
Your thoughts have changed and you realize
"You're learning.
Literature
Witches Are People Too!
She sat with her back against the seat, the clacking of the wheels against the rails luring her in and out daydreams. Normally on trips of this length, she would put in her earbuds, crank up her music, and drift off for the majority of the trip, but she was far too excited this time. Her mother had even had to give her something to help her sleep last night, something she hadn't needed for a few years. This was it. This was her year. Her mother had finally told her that she was ready. Just two days ago on her thirteenth birthday, her mother had revealed it was time for her to go live with her aunt. All the girls went to live on her aunt's "fa
Literature
Excercise
Exercise
flexing my mind
one thought at a time.
I stretch - it won't bend
I think - it won't send
I close - it pours through
I lie - comes out truth.
Exercise
flexing my heart
per beat in/ beat out.
My minions, my cells
at my sign
you'll all align and feel
something pure
something.
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This was just something I had to write for English class based upon a fairly restrictive formula. However, it cam out much better thann I had expected. It was mostly an exercise with syntax to help us understand how writers use syntax in poetry to construct meaning.
Also...
Dang man, I can't think up good titles >_<
does anyone have any better ideas...?
Also...
Dang man, I can't think up good titles >_<
does anyone have any better ideas...?
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I like this a lot, taking something so simple and making it so complex with the descriptions and actions. The similes and metaphors are great. For a title, how about, "Inertia." I always love that word and the way it rolls of my tongue, plus I don't think it's too far away from the meaning of your poem. Just an idea ^^ Anyway great piece and it's nice seeing something from you again.